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I'm back with a Comment fic invite!

Who wants to play? Got a wee ficlet that's just screaming to be let out? Here's the place!



This fortnight's prompt is:

"I told you so"


Comment here with your ficlet (or link it if you like) based on the above prompt, be it a HUGE mistake that someone was warned about, or a simple shake of the head when your character picked the wrong team to back. Any fandom (or none); any genre. And if you're more graphically inclined, how about an icon or two illustrating the prompt? That sounds pretty good to me!

PS: If you put a prompt in my post a few weeks back requesting a comment fic, I apologise that they aren't done yet. I started doing ignemferam's 'jock strap' one... and now it's 4000 words long and still not finished *headdesk*. I will try to do some of the others this weekend and NOT turn them into epics.

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fatorangekat
Jun. 13th, 2014 03:55 pm (UTC)
Just threw this together with no beta... so apologies.

Timeframe just for reference- first season.

Hands
Chin flicked a quick glance at his cousin as he continued to work on the surface table. "Kono, really, you're reading too much into it. Danny's a 'toucher'. He does that with all of us."

"And Steve?" Kono crossed her arms and leaned a slender hip against the edge of the table. The sleeve of her tank top slid off one shoulder, revealing the bright yellow strap of her bikini top.

"What do you mean?"

"He practically sits on his hands. But when Danny's in the same room..." she trailed off, cocking her head to one side, dark hair spilling over her shoulders.

Chin sighed. "Cuz, really-"

"Okay- do this. Keep track of how often Steve puts his hand on Danny today. And then on any one else."

"Fine, but if for no other reason than to prove you're reading those two all wrong."

"$20.00 says I'm not." She flashed him a grin.

***

At end of shift, Chin pulled out his wallet even as he watched Steve and Danny leave, Steve with his hand on the small of Danny's back as the two bickered back and forth.

Kono walked by him as he held up the $20. She neatly grabbed it with a smile. "Told you so."



ncisvu_lj
Jun. 13th, 2014 08:33 pm (UTC)
Love it! There was no way Chin was gonna win that bet :P
fatorangekat
Jun. 13th, 2014 09:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Just needed to scrawl something down. :)
simplyn2deep
Jun. 13th, 2014 08:48 pm (UTC)
That was a sucker bet! During season 1 Steve rarely touched anyone but Danny. He's gotten 'better' with it in later seasons, but it's still mainly Danny.
fatorangekat
Jun. 13th, 2014 09:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I don't know why, it just came to me so I scrawled it down quick. :)
haldoor
Jun. 14th, 2014 04:55 am (UTC)
Love it! So very them! Great use of the prompt! ;-)
fatorangekat
Jun. 14th, 2014 12:28 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It was a prompt that had this pop up in my head right off. Glad you liked it!
kaige68
Jun. 16th, 2014 02:22 pm (UTC)
THIS IS EXCELLENT!!!!!
fatorangekat
Jun. 17th, 2014 01:19 am (UTC)
Aw, thank you so much! I needed the smile!
agdhani
Jun. 23rd, 2015 02:19 pm (UTC)
haldoor
Jun. 28th, 2015 01:32 am (UTC)
Oooh, you're so good at these. That's brilliant. ;-)
agdhani
Jun. 28th, 2015 04:05 pm (UTC)
I do like trying to get into someone's head and try to imagine what they're thinking/feeling. Drabbles seem to be a good way for me to work on that.
haldoor
Jun. 29th, 2015 03:54 am (UTC)
Well, you do manage it very well, so keep going! I'm all for more of them! ;-)
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