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Your prompt is:


I want a graphic or 100 words featuring someone who has been dumped. Or someone who did the dumping! Maybe it was for the greater good, maybe someone else was waiting in the wings, or maybe it was just time to go. THIS is what angst is about! Let's do it!

No rewards, no deadline, just... dumped!


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Apr. 10th, 2014 07:44 am (UTC)
Your Heart Breaks
Written in Second Person POV. (Just to see if I could do it.)


You sit there in stunned silence. You can't believe it. Why? Why are they dumping you? What have you ever done to deserve this treatment? You gave the relationship and that idiot your heart, your time, and at least a small part of your soul.

You had spent more than a few nights spewing out your hopes, dreams, fears, and secrets. The one thing you had held close to your breast was the words 'I love you.'

You knew how the words caused some people to run, so you would just smile and go with the flow. The right time would come. You would feel it in your very core.

You thought that the one-year mark was it. That surely was your sign that it was okay to say those three little words. After all, you had gone to a wedding and a funeral as the plus one. Surely, that meant that your feelings would be returned in kind.

Yet, when you had finally said them, you were dumped and left to pay the bill. They couldn’t give you what you were looking for… it was only for a bit of fun.

The people around you are giving you looks of sympathy. Looks you don’t really want. You rush to pay your bill and run home. All the while, doing your best not to let the tears that were burning yours eyes spill.

When you get home, you lock your door and throw yourself on the bed for a good hard cry. You think of your entire relationship wondering what you had done wrong. You can’t come up with anything, but still you keep beating yourself up and crying.

When you finally wake the next morning, you go and clean your face. Doubt and heartache still weighing heavily on you. Even though your head is throbbing and your body physically ache, you call your best friend and see if they can come over.

Your best friend had always warned you that this would happen, but you hope that today will be met with hugs and ice creams instead of 'I told you so.'

You would get better. Your heart would mend. You would prove to that idiot that it's their loss and you can get over them. You could do this. You can smile and fake it until you make it.

Apr. 10th, 2014 08:07 am (UTC)
Re: Your Heart Breaks
Second person isn't an easy one, but you've done this well, and filled the prompt nicely! Well done! ;-)
Apr. 10th, 2014 08:14 am (UTC)
Re: Your Heart Breaks
Thanks. :) Next step is second person porn. I know how hard first person porn is, so it should be a fun trip to take.
Apr. 14th, 2014 06:51 pm (UTC)
Sorry I'm late
This is so wrenching and so well done. You can completely feel it all. *applauds*
Apr. 14th, 2014 06:59 pm (UTC)
Re: Sorry I'm late
:) Thank you. *hugs*
Mar. 2nd, 2015 04:23 pm (UTC)
Mar. 2nd, 2015 04:25 pm (UTC)
You're on fire!
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