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helsinkibaby
Sep. 8th, 2020 07:35 pm (UTC)

With Noelani by his side, it’s not Steve’s usual energetic hike through the woods, but he’s okay with that. Nothing’s wrong with a slower walk with Noelani’s hand in his, when they can talk and laugh and pause to kiss as they make their way along the trail.

When they reach their destination, strip off their clothes and dive into the cool blue water of the lake, the mist from the waterfall making diamonds sparkle in Noelani’s hair, it’s even better.

But when he pulls her close, their bodies joining as the water laps around them?

It’s the best yet.
asphaltcowgrrl
Sep. 10th, 2020 05:24 pm (UTC)
What a visual, nice work!
simplyn2deep
Sep. 9th, 2020 01:42 am (UTC)
icon of Wailua Falls

Wailua Falls icon
asphaltcowgrrl
Sep. 10th, 2020 05:27 pm (UTC)
Very pretty!
simplyn2deep
Sep. 10th, 2020 07:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you
kaige68
Sep. 9th, 2020 08:41 pm (UTC)
6 Underground
Jump, reach. Swing, fall. The water keeps coming. Then she’s moving with it. Trying to guide herself. Worrying about the rest of the team. There is so much water. Gushing out where there used to be windows. Forcing her with it. She grabs the frame, swings out over the street then back in. But she keeps going. Over the street again, and she can’t hold on. The water pushing her out of the high-rise. Her body jerks with the fall.

She doesn’t gasp or cry as she wakes. But there is a gentle hand at her back. Safe and dry.
asphaltcowgrrl
Sep. 10th, 2020 05:27 pm (UTC)
Re: 6 Underground
This was legit the scariest part of the movie I think. Great job!
asphaltcowgrrl
Sep. 10th, 2020 05:23 pm (UTC)
He stood and watched the water flow before him. It’d been a long time since he’d seen something like this, the water falling from overhead, splashing as it hit the ground, forming a small river by his feet. Sighing, he shook his head in amazement.

“Never thought a broken pipe could dump this much water,” his partner said.

“Yeah, well, if the dumbass maintenance man had thought to use this little thing called a shut off valve when he noticed the leak, it wouldn’t have.” And the pipe might not have broken either, but that was neither here nor there.
thatwasjustadream.dreamwidth.org
Sep. 12th, 2020 05:08 pm (UTC)
I found three ficlets from the challenge to write! Waterfall among them....

A bit of farewell to SPN: all 'G' and all Dean/Cas.
https://thatwasjustadream.dreamwidth.org/75164.html




Edited at 2020-09-12 05:09 pm (UTC)
angelus2hot
Sep. 18th, 2020 03:50 pm (UTC)
Waterfall, 365 Days (Massimo Torrcelli (Massimo/Any female from any fandom)), PG-13, 100 words
Read on LJ or AO3
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    21 Feb 2024, 02:42
    Oh, that is perfect for this prompt! And I can just see Howard's face when he gets that last thought! So good! Well done, my dear! ;-)
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