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Comment Fic: Day 5

It's another Comment Fic prompt for your pleasure!

Today's prompt: Beach blanket bingo

See where that leads you! Let's create words! ;-)


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Sep. 6th, 2019 03:18 pm (UTC)
I googled this to see if there was any references other than the old movie and lawd. This could get... interesting?
Sep. 6th, 2019 04:26 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah....lol
Sep. 6th, 2019 05:23 pm (UTC)
I have two very separate ideas... one is very porn-filled and the other not so much. The question is... where do I go? LOL
Sep. 6th, 2019 05:47 pm (UTC)
I vote for porn, but go with which ever one you feel more comfortable with.
Sep. 6th, 2019 06:03 pm (UTC)
I knew you would. LOL I'll have to see which way Mika takes me at lunch. :D
Sep. 6th, 2019 06:29 pm (UTC)
You know me so well...lol

If Mika isn't into porn, not to worry. Jimmy and Des have got it covered.
Sep. 6th, 2019 07:19 pm (UTC)
See, Zayne, I do pay attention!

Considering she's my alter ego, I think we're good. And... it's going to be messy. But hopefully in a good way. James is already trying to start stuff.
Sep. 6th, 2019 10:45 pm (UTC)
Those two, I swear...lol
Sep. 7th, 2019 03:50 pm (UTC)
Funny... it started out with James and then suddenly became Trish and Hil. LOL 3000 words in and I'm still not quite done. OOOPS. Comment fic who?
Sep. 7th, 2019 04:22 pm (UTC)
Sep. 6th, 2019 08:07 pm (UTC)
I also googled. Interesting just about covers it!
Sep. 6th, 2019 08:23 pm (UTC)
Right? And it was much too early in the morning to be reading such things when I did so!
Sep. 6th, 2019 08:30 pm (UTC)
😂😂 I have not wittten anything for it yet... I’m not so great with the higher ratings (way too much Irish catholic guilt, I practically self immolate through blushing!) but I figure Cho is probably a great man for the innuendo...
Sep. 6th, 2019 08:32 pm (UTC)
You and me both! All that conservative Midwestern raising I had. :)

Although... innuendo can be fun, too. <3
Sep. 7th, 2019 04:38 am (UTC)
Fill: Original fic Jimmy Bogart/Desmond Richard
"This movie sucks!" Jimmy grumbled, but only loud enough for his lover to hear.

"I told you so," Desmond quietly retorted. He hadn't wanted to watch this movie, but did it as a favor for Jimmy's best female friend, Cat.

Cat turned toward them and shushed them for what felt like the millionth time.

Jimmy mouthed, "Sorry," and tried to go back to watching the movie.

Desmond had other ideas.


"You know if Cat finds our stuff, she's gonna steal it and force us to walk back to the bungalow in the buff," Jimmy remarked as he floated next to Desmond sated after a bout of sex in the waves.

"Let her," Desmond retorted. "I'm not ashamed of my body, so folks can look their fill. And, I know for a fact, that there is no shame in your game."

"God, you are a mess," Jimmy told him with a wry chuckle.

"Aww yes," Desmond murmured before catching hold of Jimmy and pulling him into a soft kiss. "But, I'm your mess."

"Yes, you are," Jimmy agreed before diving in for another kiss.


Cat heard the love birds and decided to leave them alone. It wasn't often that she got to see Jimmy so happy and content.

Next time, they messed up one of her movie nights, she would make them pay and pay dearly.
Sep. 9th, 2019 12:42 am (UTC)
Re: Fill: Original fic Jimmy Bogart/Desmond Richard
Aw, that was sweet. And much nicer than either Trish or Hil would have been.
Sep. 9th, 2019 01:08 pm (UTC)
RE: Re: Fill: Original fic Jimmy Bogart/Desmond Richard
Thanks and that's very true.
Sep. 9th, 2019 04:37 pm (UTC)
Re: Fill: Original fic Jimmy Bogart/Desmond Richard
No problem. :) Nice to see friends helping their friends. Hahaha.
Sep. 15th, 2019 08:41 pm (UTC)
Re: Fill: Original fic Jimmy Bogart/Desmond Richard
YAY! You're doing so well this month! ;-)
Sep. 15th, 2019 10:13 pm (UTC)
RE: Re: Fill: Original fic Jimmy Bogart/Desmond Richard
Sep. 8th, 2019 09:10 pm (UTC)
The Mentalist, Cho/Vega

“I don’t like the beach.”

Sitting on her couch, Michelle turned an amazed gaze on Cho. She hadn’t expected picking vacation spots to be easy, but she hadn’t expected him to shoot down every suggestion either. Particularly not the beach. “You grew up in California,” she reminded him and he nodded like that explained everything.


She waited for a few moments to see if he was going to elaborate. When that proved futile, she leaned closer to him. “What’s not to like about the beach? The heat of the sun, the sound of the surf, the sand between your toes...”

“The water is full of pollution, go swimming there and you’ll end up being radioactive. Your skin is so pale, you’ll end up being sunburned within a half an hour. And the sand...” He actually shuddered. “The sand doesn’t stay between your toes. It gets everywhere.”

Michelle raised her eyebrows deliberately. “Are you speaking from experience?”

He didn’t blink. “Unfortunately.”

She was silent for a moment, considering her options. No matter what she thought of though, it was apparent to her that there was a real possibility that they might end up spending their first real vacation together holed up in her apartment.

Not that that would be a disaster, per se.

But she did want to get away for a few days.

Which meant she only had one option left.

Play dirty.

“Kimball,” she said, shifting quickly so that she was straddling his hips, winding her arms around his neck. “I want you to imagine something. You and me, just like this, on some deserted beach somewhere. No cell phones, no FBI, drinks with little umbrellas in our hands...”

His hands moved to her hips, fingers flexing almost experimentally. “If the beach is deserted, how do we get the drinks?”

She continued as if he hadn’t spoken. “You with your shirt off...” She ran her hands down his chest and back up again, feeling his body respond. “Me in a teeny tiny bikini... needing someone to rub sunscreen all over me so I won’t fry to a crisp...”

She gasped as he moved suddenly, flipping her over so that she was on her back with him on top of her. “When you put it like that...” he told her, “I’ll book flights first thing in the morning.”

She felt a smile breaking over her face, one that had as much to do with the way he was kissing her neck as the prospect of holidays. “Where to?”

“Florida... Bermuda... Tahiti.... somewhere warm... with beaches.”

Each word was punctuated by a kiss and it almost distracted Michelle from teasing him. “I thought you hated the beach.”

He pulled back enough so that could look into her eyes. “But I love you,” he told her simply.

There was nothing she could say to that, mainly because her throat closed up with a swell of emotion. He didn’t often say those words and when he did, they meant something. Hopefully kissing him would have the same effect, she thought, and when he responded enthusiastically, she knew he understood perfectly.
Sep. 9th, 2019 12:44 am (UTC)
Re: The Mentalist, Cho/Vega
Hah, you get him, Michelle! But also, very sweet. :)
Sep. 15th, 2019 08:42 pm (UTC)
Re: The Mentalist, Cho/Vega
Excellent! Keep up the great work! ;-)
Sep. 9th, 2019 12:41 am (UTC)
This in no way resembles a comment fic any longer after reaching nearly 5k words. It also in no way resembles the prompt either but... um, oops?

Some Beach Somewhere, Day 1
Sep. 9th, 2019 01:08 pm (UTC)
It's words and funny as hell. Works for me.
Sep. 9th, 2019 04:38 pm (UTC)
Hah, thanks!
Sep. 15th, 2019 08:42 pm (UTC)
HA! It's words, so it's all good! You're doing fantastically! ;-)
Sep. 16th, 2019 06:11 pm (UTC)
Oh, it's words, alright. Chaotic, crazy words. LOL
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