Did that make sense?
I want to include some tiny references to something that will feature prominently in the sequel (but which isn't relevant to Book 1), and try to make a few more connections between the two (not sure that's considered foreshadowing, but I want the readers to pick up book 2 and say 'oh...that was what that was'...or 'we've seen that before...' or 'that's what that meant'.
Anyhow. resulted in about 2 hrs worth of time altogether, so that's good enough.
simplyn2deep you're up next.