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Give it a Whirl Day 28

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Today's style prompt

Poetry



100 words or a 1 graphic story. Who's got this?

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agdhani
Jan. 28th, 2018 07:44 pm (UTC)
I dabble in poetry only occasionally...though I used to write song lyrics with my brother.

Anyhow...I did this as an expression (in my rp project) of where poor David Haller currently is...(David Haller, Marvel, Legion) Word counted 100 words so...I'm going with it.

It did not matter
The blinding bleached shine
The smothering stale shadow
Thundering quiet
Whispering endless rumbles
Stuck n the amber
In the sickly sweet taint
Of the iron crimson bouquet
Of vaporous intoxication
Of ozone
Of death
Always the beacon
The woeful wolf’s searching cry
A sea’s perfume
The frost tinted rose
On the salt flat of mourning
Parched with sighs and tears
Fingers torn from reaching,
Scratching,
Clawing for discharge
And yet in the freeze
In this coffin of eternal passing
There was nothing more
Nevermore
Always alone
With the screaming
The echoes
The silence
Inside his head
cmk418
Jan. 29th, 2018 02:09 am (UTC)
I like it. It works as a fine companion piece to the Legion work on Ao3 that you shared earlier this month. Nicely done!
agdhani
Jan. 29th, 2018 05:50 am (UTC)
Thanks!

I'm using it as a chapter in that ongoing piece, so glad it works. Just have to post the other stuff that comes before it first :)

Edited at 2018-01-29 05:50 am (UTC)
chokolattejedi
Feb. 5th, 2018 08:09 pm (UTC)
Just Waiting For The Rain (179 words) by ChokolatteJedi
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Danger Days: The True Lives of the Fabulous Killjoys (Album)
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: Party Poison
Additional Tags: Community: 1-million-words, Poetry, Ballades
Summary: The wind whips across the desert
Kicking up small tornadoes of dirt

Edited at 2018-02-05 08:10 pm (UTC)
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