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Give it a Whirl Day 16

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Today's style prompt

Describe distrust


100 words or a 1 graphic story. Who's got this?

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asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 16th, 2018 08:09 pm (UTC)
It’s not that he thought the cowboy was lying to him, although that was always a possibility. But there was something not quite right about what Reyes was saying. The facts felt skewed and the emotions forced. Zayne’s handsome face held a note of something undefinable and it troubled James. Why would he fib? There was no reason in this situation, but his gut was telling him not to fall for it. Don’t buy into the malarkey that the Texan was spewing. But god, those eyes, they were drawing him in.

“Okay, cowboy,” he sighed. “Tell me again, what happened?”
haldoor
Jan. 16th, 2018 10:18 pm (UTC)
Oooh, I know that feeling so well, and I think you have hit the nail on the head here. Well done!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 16th, 2018 10:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I think we've all been here at one time or another. :)
cmk418
Jan. 17th, 2018 01:52 am (UTC)
But god, those eyes, they were drawing him in.

Those eyes will get you every time.

Well done!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 17th, 2018 07:31 pm (UTC)
Hah, thanks! And Zayne's got these purty green ones, too. :)

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