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Give it a Whirl Day 15

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Today's style prompt

Describe grieving


100 words or a 1 graphic story. Who's got this?

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cmk418
Jan. 16th, 2018 04:16 am (UTC)
The clichés have it wrong. It doesn’t feel like a punch to the gut. That’s too small for what this is. It feels like an implosion starting inside you and sucking you inward, trying desperately to fill the gap of that something or someone that used to be there and is now gone forever. You curl inside yourself, chasing the thoughts, the memories of your old life, so deep inside that you’ll never get out, trapped in the darkness beneath the rubble of what you no longer have. The moment has changed you, and you will never be the same.
kaige68
Jan. 16th, 2018 06:20 pm (UTC)
Wonderfully heavy!
cmk418
Jan. 17th, 2018 03:07 am (UTC)
Thank you!
haldoor
Jan. 16th, 2018 10:17 pm (UTC)
Oooh! So hard, and yet so real. Nicely done.
cmk418
Jan. 17th, 2018 03:07 am (UTC)
Thank you!

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