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Give it a Whirl Day 9

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Today's style prompt

No adjectives


100 words or a 1 graphic story. Who's got this?

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cmk418
Jan. 9th, 2018 12:31 pm (UTC)
(I'm hoping that possessive & indefinite articles don't count. If they do, I'll try again)

As the snow falls, I walk the path around Belmont Harbor. Boats are docked in their home for the winter, months from being released. I do not wear headphones or listen to music. The tink, tink, tink of ice moving against itself and the docks, the crunch of my feet in the snow, and the whisper of the snowflakes coming down are my soundtrack. The cold of the wind penetrates my clothing, layers atop layers, shirt, sweater, coat, sweatpants under jeans, boots over socks over booties- I find that I do not mind the chill. Here I am at peace.

kaige68
Jan. 9th, 2018 02:37 pm (UTC)
WOW! That is super impressive! woohoo!
cmk418
Jan. 10th, 2018 01:06 am (UTC)
Thank you! (And I appreciate you posting these early enough for me to play with before I have to go to work.)
lasairfhiona
Jan. 9th, 2018 02:41 pm (UTC)
Beautiful!
cmk418
Jan. 10th, 2018 01:07 am (UTC)
Thank you!
thatwasjustadream.dreamwidth.org
Jan. 9th, 2018 06:15 pm (UTC)
This is great! So evocative.
cmk418
Jan. 10th, 2018 01:08 am (UTC)
Thanks! Walking around Belmont Harbor in a snow storm is actually something I used to do when I lived in Chicago.
haldoor
Jan. 11th, 2018 02:55 am (UTC)
That is gorgeous - well done! ;-)
cmk418
Jan. 12th, 2018 03:23 am (UTC)
Thank you!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 16th, 2018 08:19 pm (UTC)
Very nice! This is going to be a tough one!
chokolattejedi
Jan. 16th, 2018 07:23 am (UTC)
Whips (136 words) by ChokolatteJedi
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Star Wars - All Media Types, Star Wars Episode VIII: The Last Jedi
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: Temiri Blagg
Additional Tags: Community: 1-million-words, Spoilers, Writing Exercise, POV First Person, Slavery
Summary: Temiri has to finish mucking.

Phew! I never realized how many words are technically adjectives!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 16th, 2018 08:21 pm (UTC)
Nicely done! And I know... I'm going to work on this one next and adjectives are our friends! :D
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 16th, 2018 08:33 pm (UTC)
I think I managed to keep all the adjectives out of this. :D
--
“I can’t,” he said. “It’s not what I do.”

“Well, what do you do then,” she asked, raising an eyebrow in question.

“I’m not sure,” he replied, sitting on the stool by the bar. “I go out and do what I do but I cannot put into words what it is that I do.”

She blinked. “That is not very…”

“I know,” he agreed.

“I can tell you what he does.”

They looked at the man in the doorway.

“What does he do,” she asked.

He pointed at the boy on the stool. “The boy makes trouble,” the man said.
kaige68
Jan. 17th, 2018 09:17 pm (UTC)
Well done!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 17th, 2018 09:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
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