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Give it a Whirl Day 2

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Today's style prompt

First Person POV


100 words or an icon in first person. Who's got this?

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asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 3rd, 2018 01:30 am (UTC)
Exactly 100 words even. Meant to add I used the 100-in-100 prompt 'false' to spur my idea. :D
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He says I’m ungrateful when I’ve worked hard for everything I have. He thinks I’m rude but in truth, sometimes my sarcasm comes off harsher than I plan. He says I’m selfish but can I help it if I’m greedy when it comes to the time I spend with my loved ones?

He’s wrong.

He thinks that I’m a user, a playboy, but what he doesn’t know is that I’m scared. Terrified of opening my heart and being let down, of getting hurt. Again. That it would destroy me to lose what I have now.

He can go to hell.



Edited at 2018-01-03 01:31 am (UTC)
kaige68
Jan. 3rd, 2018 01:32 am (UTC)
You did awesome!!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 3rd, 2018 07:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
haldoor
Jan. 3rd, 2018 08:51 pm (UTC)
Oooh, this is great! You are kicking butt with these!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 3rd, 2018 09:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :D
cmk418
Jan. 4th, 2018 01:59 am (UTC)
I doubt you know how beautiful you are. How I love to hear the Spanish roll off your tongue because it is a language that the two of us can share. How I love to watch your hands in action, being strong when they need to be strong, tender when they need to be tender. I wonder how those hands would feel when they touch me.

These thoughts creep into my mind as I’m on the verge of falling asleep. “The sinful hours,” Mother Superior would call them. “Sinful hours for sinful thoughts.”

But I do not feel like confessing.
kaige68
Jan. 8th, 2018 04:07 pm (UTC)
This is stunning!
fairyniamh
Jan. 6th, 2018 07:38 am (UTC)
Here Kittty
I fear what tomorrow will bring. Silly, I know. Tomorrow is always an unknown. Even when I have things planned, I acknowledge that tomorrow's plans can so easily be turned on its head.

I've lost count of when I needed to go right, only to find the road blocked, if not destroyed; forcing me to go left.

I guess it wasn't all bad, I had found some good things. I found Socks on one of my detours. I knew Sam was going to be pissed when I brought the kitten home. How was I supposed to know Socks was Sam?

Fin
kaige68
Jan. 8th, 2018 04:08 pm (UTC)
RE: Here Kittty
Beautiful!
cmk418
Jan. 10th, 2018 01:02 am (UTC)
Re: Here Kittty
Fun. And I love the twist at the end!
fairyniamh
Jan. 10th, 2018 04:43 am (UTC)
Re: Here Kittty
:) Thank you.
lasairfhiona
Jan. 9th, 2018 05:58 am (UTC)
This is the 3rd Installment in what will be an ongoing mini series. Part 1 ;Day 7 no dialogue, Part 2; Day 4, 3rd person POV

It physically hurt to watch him struggle to walk. My little brother so strong and capable reduced to using a cane and watching every step he took so he didn’t step wrong. It was all I could do not to breakdown as I helped him learn to walk again after all surgeries it took to put his leg back together again.

I know being in Maine with Uncle Angus is the best place for him to finish regaining his strength. Our uncle will be just the right amount of hard on him while also being easy. And I know with lobster season in full swing it wont be long before Ben is pushing to be out on the boats. It was the best therapy for me when I buggered my hip skiing it will be the best thing for Ben too. Uncle Angus wont let him go out in less than good condition and that’s great motivation to keep working to get stronger.


Edited at 2018-01-09 06:00 am (UTC)
kaige68
Jan. 9th, 2018 09:40 pm (UTC)
Great work!
lasairfhiona
Jan. 10th, 2018 06:38 am (UTC)
Thank you
cmk418
Jan. 10th, 2018 01:01 am (UTC)
Very nice! I'm really enjoying this!
lasairfhiona
Jan. 10th, 2018 06:38 am (UTC)
Thanks. I’m sure there will be more to come:-)
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 12th, 2018 06:33 pm (UTC)
Aw, this is both sweet and sad!
chokolattejedi
Jan. 16th, 2018 01:30 am (UTC)
Connected (644 words) by ChokolatteJedi
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Star Wars - All Media Types, Star Wars Episode VIII: The Last Jedi
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Rey & Ben Solo | Kylo Ren
Characters: Ben Solo | Kylo Ren, Rey (Star Wars)
Additional Tags: Community: 1-million-words, POV First Person, Force Bond (Star Wars)
Summary: I know now that, were I to turn around, she would be there.
crookedspoon
Jan. 24th, 2018 11:43 pm (UTC)
I have been to nothingness (500 words) by crookedspoon
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Raven Cycle - Maggie Stiefvater
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Joseph Kavinsky/Prokopenko
Characters: Prokopenko (Raven Cycle), Joseph Kavinsky
Additional Tags: Implied/Referenced Suicide, Suicide Pact, POV First Person, POV Prokopenko, Inspired by Poetry
Summary:

You had a bottle of pills but I wouldn’t let you swallow them.
You said Will you love me even more when I'm dead?
—Richard Siken, "I Had a Dream About You"

kaige68
Jan. 25th, 2018 09:23 pm (UTC)
LOOKIT ALL THE WORDS!!! YAY YOU!
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