April 3rd, 2016

SGA - Team 3

Help needed

Upon the lovely haldoor's suggestion, I'm asking for a favor...

I need a beta. It's mostly for grammar/spelling since English is my second language, but all suggestions are welcome.

It's for a Stargate Atlantis McShep fic made from fabulous art I chose from the sgareversebang. The story is NC-17 (explicit sex at the end), and just short of 20K words.

Roughly: Several years ago, John Sheppard flipped a coin and didn't go to Atlantis. Life continued and he eventually left the Air Force. He now works as a photographer. When the SGC makes the Stargate Program public, it's met with a lot of criticism. John is offered a job on Atlantis as a photographer, in a public relations operation. The story is about second chances and how John finds his home, his team, and love in the end.

The posting will be from April 11th to 14th, so I'd need it back by the 10th or so.

Help would be greatly appreciated! And I'll be very very grateful :)
dwell in possibility

Word of the Day 04/03/16 Asterism

Asterism (noun)
asterism [as-tuh-riz-uh m]


noun
1. Astronomy.
    a. a group of stars.
    b. a constellation.
2. Mineralogy. a property of some crystallized minerals of showing a starlike luminous figure in transmitted light or, in a cabochon-cut stone, by reflected light.
3. three asterisks ( or ) printed to draw attention to a passage it precedes.

Origin: 1590-1600; < Greek asterism (ós) a marking with stars. See asterisk, -ism

Now YOU come up with a sentence (or fic? or graphic?) that best illustrates the word.