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Give it a Whirl Day 6

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Today's style prompt

Dialog only


100 words or a graphic. Who's got this?

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cmk418
Jan. 6th, 2018 08:38 pm (UTC)
“Hi.”

“Hi?”

“I saw you sitting there. Can I join you?”

“I guess.”

“I’m Emily.”

“I know. Emily Summers. You’re in my chem class.”

“Really?”

“I usually sit in the back.”

“Oh.”

“Yeah.”

“What do you think of Professor Daniels?’

“He’s okay. I thought chemistry would be more interesting than physics. Like we might have more of an opportunity to blow shit up. But so far…”

“Yeah, I know what you mean. What’s your major?”

“Aren’t you supposed to ask what my name is first?”

“It’s Austin.”

“How’d you know?”

“I saw you at the rink. Hi, Austin.”

“Hi, Emily.”
haldoor
Jan. 7th, 2018 03:53 am (UTC)
This works perfectly! Well done! ;-)
cmk418
Jan. 7th, 2018 05:11 am (UTC)
Thank you!
kaige68
Jan. 8th, 2018 04:33 pm (UTC)
Lovely!
cmk418
Jan. 9th, 2018 03:02 am (UTC)
Thank you!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 8th, 2018 09:40 pm (UTC)
This has me cracking up because my high school chem teacher was a ditz! I loved her though. <3 Cute little bit of dialogue. :)
cmk418
Jan. 9th, 2018 03:03 am (UTC)
Glad I could make you laugh.
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 10th, 2018 09:26 pm (UTC)
It's much appreciated, too. :D
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 8th, 2018 09:52 pm (UTC)
Knowing I was going to publish this to the comm, I did my best to tamp down on these guys' potty mouths. They like to swear at each other when they're fighting. :D

--

“Shut up.”

“Not on your life, narco.”

“You need to shut up now, cowboy. If you don’t, I’ll –”

“You’ll what? Huh? I’m waiting, gingerbread.”

“I’ll tell Andy.”

“Go ahead, tell Zek. I don’t give a damn.”

“I bet you’d care if he was here, Reyes.”

“Bet you I wouldn’t, Rosewood. Zek and I go too far back for that to bother him.”

“Guess we’ll find out when I tell Andy.”

“Tell me what?”

“Um…”

“Yeah…”

“Jay? Zayne? Who is telling me what?”

“Nothing.”

“Actually we wanted to say…

“How nice your hair looked today.”

“Why did I come home?”
cmk418
Jan. 9th, 2018 01:29 am (UTC)
Nice. I love the back-and-forth between them.

(Are we supposed to keep these things PG? I'll have to remember that with some of my heavier stuff.)
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 9th, 2018 01:43 am (UTC)
Thank you! They love to bicker and it shows. :D

I don't think it has to be kept PG but if you go over that you need to warn or link to your journal. But that's only if I'm remembering correctly. I personally wanted to keep it PG because I knew I'd be posting though, if that makes sense.
kaige68
Jan. 9th, 2018 09:38 pm (UTC)
HA!! LOVE IT!
asphaltcowgrrl
Jan. 9th, 2018 10:36 pm (UTC)
THANKS!
chokolattejedi
Jan. 16th, 2018 06:38 am (UTC)
Continued Conversations (187 words) by ChokolatteJedi
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Star Wars - All Media Types, Star Wars Episode VIII: The Last Jedi
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Rey & Ben Solo | Kylo Ren
Characters: Rey (Star Wars), Ben Solo | Kylo Ren
Additional Tags: Community: 1-million-words, Spoilers, Force Bond (Star Wars), Dialogue-Only
Summary: “So, it appears this is still…”
“So it seems.”
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